#33

Well I just finished up draft one about an hour ago and I think it was a pretty good draft for the most part. It included all my main focus points, all my sources cited correctly, and the thesis of my paper. I know it needs a lot more work which I'm glad that this was just a draft because I have a lot more to do and could make this paper really good with a few more key points and a couple more good sources. When I go to write my final draft I feel like this will be the backbone of the paper and it will take a lot less time knowing I have this. I forgot to do a conclusion paragraph because I was distracted greatly by the super bowl. I need to add a little more information into all my paragraphs, create good, flowing topic and summary sentences, and add a conclusion paragraph, or a good ending paragraph that flows well with the rest of the paper and ties it all together. I am going to go to the writing center to help me out with these few last things. I still want and need to find a relevant, scholarly, article on Hilary Clinton and her democratic candidate presidential run. This well help me further my argument on my specific real world connection. I think my paper has a strong topic and argument and when it all comes together it will make a really good point.